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Essential MBA Essay Writing Tips You Need to Know Now

MBA essay writing tips

When you’re applying to business school, nailing the MBA essays is one of the most critical steps in the process. But here’s the thing: many people think they know what makes a great essay until they start writing. In our experience, applicants often miss vital elements that can make or break their chances. It’s also important to remember that essay expectations can vary by school, so researching each program’s culture is crucial. SBC consultant and B-Schooled co-host Chandler loves helping MBA applicants create compelling narratives in their business school applications. Today, we’re reviewing six must-know MBA essay writing tips from one of Chandler’s popular podcast episodes so you can take your essays from meh to wow.

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Essential MBA Essay Writing Tips

MBA essay writing tips

Tip #1: Answer the Question Directly

We cannot stress this enough: answer the question you’re asked! You would be shocked at how many people don’t do this. If the essay prompt says, “What is most important to you and why?” then you’d better start your essay with, “What’s most important to me is [X], and here’s why.”

Don’t dance around it or give a vague, rambling answer that barely touches on the topic. The AdCom wants to know if you can communicate succinctly, distill your thoughts, and make your point. If the prompt asks for three leadership traits, don’t bury the lead—say, “My three key leadership traits are…” and dive right in.

Admissions officers typically skim through applications quickly. Given this, it’s crucial to prioritize your key messages right from the start. Focus on leading with your strengths and use each paragraph to highlight a specific, important aspect of your application. By making it easy for them to identify the core points, you ensure your application stands out, even within the limited time they have to review it.

Tip #2: Use the Active Voice

Let’s return to high school English class for a minute: active voice versus passive voice. The active voice shows who did what. The passive voice makes it sound as if things just happened to you. You want to use an active voice in your essays, resumes, and interviews.

For example, saying, “I received a promotion after two years at the firm,“ is passive. It sounds like you just hung around until you got promoted. Instead, say, “After leading several major projects, I advocated for and earned an early promotion.“ See the difference? You’re showing action, impact, and initiative.

Better yet, say, “In my first year, I initiated a project that fundamentally changed how we reported to clients, which led to my promotion.“ Now, you’re truly showcasing what you did.

This goes for everything—whether you’re writing about strengths or weaknesses, focus on your actions and how you grew from the experience. Don’t let the essay happen to you; take control of the story.

Tip #3: Start with an Attention-Grabbing Sentence

Your first sentence is the most important one in the entire essay—don’t waste it! A dull or overly formal sentence like, “I am excited to apply to XYZ Business School,“ won’t cut it. You want to grab attention right out of the gate.

One of Chandler’s favorite examples? A client once opened his essay with, “I was 12 years old when I buried my first body.“ (Yes, you read that right!) He was volunteering at his mosque, where he helped wash and prepare bodies for burial—a profoundly formative experience that he used to answer the “What matters most to you and why?“ prompt for Stanford.

You don’t have to be that dramatic, but find an opening that makes the reader want to keep going. Another client opened with, “My supervisor doesn’t believe an MBA is worth it—but I disagree.“ Or, “My first time on national television, I was outshined by a six-foot-tall dancing ice cream cone.“ These sentences make you want to learn more, right? That’s the effect you’re going for.

Pro-tip for MBA essay writing: If your first sentence sounds like something anyone could write, scrap it and try again. Make it personal and memorable, and hook the reader.

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Tip #4: Use the STAR Format

You’ve probably heard of the STAR format—Situation, Task, Action, Result. This is an excellent structure for telling a story in your essay because it keeps everything clear and focused. Here’s how it works:

  • Situation: What was happening? Set the stage.
  • Task: What were you responsible for, or what challenges were you facing?
  • Action: What did you do? (Be specific here!)
  • Result: What was the outcome? (Don’t forget to talk about what you learned or how you grew.)

For example, don’t just say, “I led a project, and we increased revenue by 20%.“ Sure, that’s a good result, but also tell us what you learned about your leadership style or how this experience prepared you for future challenges. Make it personal and, where possible, quantifiable.

star method for MBA essay

Tip #5: Structure Your Essay 

A clear structure is vital. Even the most brilliant ideas can get lost if your essay is disorganized. Think of it like this: every essay needs a beginning, a middle, and an end. If in doubt, the classic five-paragraph essay works. Here’s a quick formula:

  • Paragraph 1: Attention-grabbing opener, followed by a direct answer to the prompt and an overview of what’s to come.
  • Paragraphs 2-4: Use these to dive into your examples. If the essay asks about leadership traits, each paragraph can focus on one trait.
  • Paragraph 5: Wrap it all up. Come back to your opener, summarize your main points, and tie everything together.

For instance, if you started with a personal story like “I buried my first body at age 12,“ you could close with a reflective line like, “The lessons I learned in those moments still shape how I approach leadership and life today.”

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Tip #6: Keep It Simple

Finally, one of the best MBA essay writing tips is to avoid sounding overly formal or stuffy. Aim for a tone that is professional yet conversational, authentic, and confident. Simple, straightforward language works best. If it sounds like you’re using a thesaurus to squeeze in as many big words as possible, it’s time to rework your essay. You want your voice to come through and the essay to feel natural.

It’s okay if your first few drafts aren’t perfect—that’s what revision is for. As Justice Brandeis said, “There is no great writing, only great rewriting.“

So, take the time to rewrite and refine your essay. It gets better with each draft. With these six tips in mind, you’re well on your way to writing a standout MBA essay. Remember, you’ve got this! 

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